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oh holy fools.

2006-05-17, 04:34

Pineappleystuff

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oh holy fools.

Some haikus. I am drunk and missing my husband. and i've had shitty birthday. enjoy..

Pink vodka and sprite
ice ice ice cubes cool my lips
No Kisses through phones

Fire is smoldering
Hot Marshmallow burns my hand
Stop it with my tongue

You are over there
I am waiting over here
This sucks so so much

My haiku? Awful.
Happy Birthday? Sure. Yeah Right.
Down another one.

ok i am done. I am prepared to be flamed. these are really horrible. haha.

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hi my name is whitney, but you can call me Scrumptious

2006-05-17, 04:45

tmfreak

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haha i like the drunkeness. Although i usually write actually songs and not.. "cheap poetry" I enjoyed it. Provided laughs because i like being drunk.

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2006-05-17, 04:52

Pineappleystuff

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thats good.

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