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Burning Bodies
Man, Wally needs to write some music for this one. I was reading it and it sounds like a black/death metal chantlike thing in a deep growled voice. It could go Zappa-weird on the music. I think that would be cool.
It's about something specific so comments are appreciated. Thanks for the read.
" Burning Bodies "
I've seen you all plotting to kill what I love
Known of your presence for some time now
Even though you felt sheltered and hidden
The eyes of the master were on you all the time
Confirmation and checking twice to be sure
The conquest was planned and the attack became real
Quick and efficiently moved on my prey
Before my beloved became it's own
The lamp lit up at the touch of a hand
Flame fanned by the wind dancing on the grey skin
Bodies once motionlessly waiting for their moment
Lapsed into fire and fell to the ground
(Chorus)
Burning bodies
I can see them coil as they fall
See them clinging to their lifeblood as they die
Hear the hiss as they succumb to my might
They are helpless as my assault takes their life
Two plans of attack I've brought to a halt
Both dead by my hands, my oppressors are my victims
Peace reigns the future til another opposition
Power over evil, destruction overcome
(Chorus)
Burning bodies
I can see them coil as they fall
See them clinging to their lifeblood as they die
Hear the hiss as they succumb to my might
They are helpless as my assault takes their life
(repeat chorus)
BJH
5/7/2006
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2009-05-04, 15:10
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I've seen you all plotting to kill what I love
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Whatever helps you sleep at night - CATERKILLER  |
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Since this got no replies before and I just did "the deed" again today I thought I'd give this a revisit. Thanks for reading it. It's about my annual ritual of torching gypsy moth caterpillars on my elderly maple tree.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2009-05-04, 15:11
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Darn it, Paddy! You could have at least waited til I posted. Caterkiller. I like that.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2009-05-04, 15:14
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
It's about the genocidal holocaust of innocent caterpillars that I burn to death like Jews in a Polish furnace every year while my husband masturbates and my children dance naked around a burning car.
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2009-05-04, 15:18
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You are too weird for words. 
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2009-05-05, 19:34
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I envy you. I mean, I would need something like the holocaust to come up with lyrics like these, caterpillars just doesn't do it for me.
A fine piece to growl ominously while going about the FINAL SOLUTION OF THE CATERPILLAR PROBLEM!
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Listening to Cannibal Corpse and cutting trees with a chainsaw, now that's metal
"He preferred the hard truth over his dearest illusion. That, is the heart of science."
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2009-05-05, 20:33
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I like making a mountain out of a mole hill just to make it interesting and be sneaky.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2009-05-05, 21:13
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I like making a mountain out of a mole hill
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