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2002-08-27, 00:43
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New Blood
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something
doesnt always rhyme...meh...what can you do...???
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no more pain...
no more cracks added
unto this broken heart
unto this broken soul
unto this broken girl
unto this broken whore
ive given up
given up on everything
everytime...i lose
its impossible to win
mutilation at its best
cut, slice, repeat
ive ripped at my own flesh
torn it off, and ate it raw
i cant stand myself
i cant stand this face
i cant stand this person ive become
yet i still wont change
i still wont try to glue myself back together
im out of place, im out of faith
and no ones here to reassure me that everythings alright
that everything will pull itself together in time
i have no one
i have nothing
i have blackness
emptiness
nothingness
ive lost myself to the empty void
and ive locked myself inside
my world has faded
my reality is somewhat damaged
inside myself i hide
this life has become so pointless
meaningless...
i dont need this
i dont need anything
all i need is to be cradled
in the arms of a mutilated death
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2002-08-27, 08:58
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Master Killer
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that, scares the shit out of me.
but I don't understand the story and the rhyme thingy  |
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2002-08-27, 10:11
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The Devil
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It's pretty good. I'll rate it.....4. 
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2002-08-27, 13:18
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New Blood
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wow....someone actually read it. GO ME...heheh
memnoch 
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2002-08-27, 18:38
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The Devil
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memnoch .......i mean, wait.....uh, brutal vagina
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2002-08-27, 22:51
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Post-whore
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i think i'm scared of vagina now
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2002-08-27, 23:53
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New Blood
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2002-08-28, 00:21
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I am a tax on the world..
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i love you, and i think your as weird as me
hehe, just read my latest lyric
entitled "this makes no sense, hehehe"
if you don't believe me
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
Last edited by powersofterror : 2002-08-28 at 00:26.
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2002-08-28, 01:40
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Post-whore
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mutilation at its best scares me, but i love you baby!
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2002-08-28, 10:04
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The Devil
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hehe, damn right!  
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Through me you pass into the city of woe
Through me you pass into eternal pain
Through me among the people lost for ay
Justice the founder of my fabric moved
To rear me was the task of power divine
Supremest wisdom, and primeval love
Before me things create were none, save things
Eternal, and eternal I endure
All hope abandon, ye who enter here
Against the concert of the Immortals he cannot stand alone.
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2002-08-28, 12:30
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New Blood
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Location: Toronto
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2002-08-31, 05:35
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to me it sounds like a slow emo tune. with a slow constant beat in the back ground, maybe a slow bass going and possibly soft guitar chords just repeating over whilst a rather emotional struck voice 'cries' (not cries..but emotional) the words. i suppose a bit like a ballard. i have no idea how you intended it, but thats wat i hear.
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aha