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Old 2006-04-17, 09:23
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Untitled doodlings

This is for a blakk metuhl project in the vein of Xasthur. It's unfinished, I wrote it on a train in a moment of random rage.

If my words were free,
I would conquer you with naught but a sylable.
These rings that bound them to my esophagus
are starting to show the scratches of time.
She claws at them for she is everpersistent,
engraving into them the maps of my lunacy.

If my words were sins,
I would drown forever in the fires you ignited with your breath....

And I don't know where to go with this or if it's even worth it.

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Old 2006-04-17, 13:06
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No black metal singer ever says Oesophagus
 
Old 2006-04-20, 18:03
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As it is said though, black metal needs to start progressing.
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Also, check out Autopsy, the vocalist sounds like hes about to eat your grandmother while fucking you in the eye. Brutal.


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I coated the end of a toothpick with Satan's blood and simply wiped it across the top of an omelet. PERFECT!
 
Old 2006-04-20, 18:06
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i like it
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Old 2006-04-20, 18:09
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Yeah, it's good.
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Also, check out Autopsy, the vocalist sounds like hes about to eat your grandmother while fucking you in the eye. Brutal.


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I coated the end of a toothpick with Satan's blood and simply wiped it across the top of an omelet. PERFECT!

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