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2006-04-17, 03:58
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Lo, they do call to me...
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untitled so far
i am waiting
waiting for the end
i turned to booze
i turned to pain
neither could contend
so i strike another match
and light another cancer
i take a drag
suck it in
and hope to find an answer
am i good enough
good enough for love
another breath of
poison death
gazing at stars above
i soon come to grips and
i turn my heart to stone
cus all who live
and the love they give
will die and die alone
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2006-04-17, 14:05
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Slayer of dumb cunts
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Thats a pretty stone cold song. Not too bad. I like the... pessimissm in it. Suits me/my style well 
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2006-04-17, 14:11
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Life is pain.
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WOW THATS IMPRESSIVE COMING FROM YOU ITS THE FIRST ONE I LIKED.
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2006-04-17, 14:11
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Life is pain.
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Didn't mean caps
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2006-04-17, 18:54
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Lo, they do call to me...
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Didn't mean caps
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HAHAHA, that was great, when i read the comment, i didnt take it seriously, but ok, lol
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2006-04-17, 20:48
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Thats really good man.
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im 50 percent irish and 100 percent pain. (SHAKE DOWN!!!!)
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NECROTIC
Canadian Brutal Death (So you know it's good)
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2006-04-18, 20:14
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New Blood
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Excellent fuckin work dude
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2006-04-19, 01:35
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That was good. I've read it a couple times now. The end was especially haunting and seemed to break away from the more present feeling of the beginning.
"another breath of
poison death
gazing at stars above
i soon come to grips and
i turn my heart to stone
cus all who live
and the love they give
will die and die alone"
That was gripping to me.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-04-19, 04:32
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Slayer of dumb cunts
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
That was good. I've read it a couple times now. The end was especially haunting and seemed to break away from the more present feeling of the beginning.
"another breath of
poison death
gazing at stars above
i soon come to grips and
i turn my heart to stone
cus all who live
and the love they give
will die and die alone"
That was gripping to me.
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agreed
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...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
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