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Old 2006-04-09, 21:17
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On a Cloudy Day

Bright flavored. Inspired by a revisit from my muse.

" On a Cloudy Day "

Drumming inside is a heartbeat
That stings everytime it makes a sound
Because day after day when you've gone away
I keep wondering what you're doing now

Are you missing me the same as I miss you
Nights filled with emptiness
No shadows cast on the grass beneath the moonlit clouds
Just my heart cast into the darkness all alone

(Chorus)
But maybe the dawn will break and I'll see you smiling there again
And the old sad memories that seem to repeat will be wiped away
The eastern star will draw the curtain for the silvered lining to appear
And dance a rubied parade across the day
Even on a cloudy day I'd see the sun

I've conjured up a spell for you to remember me
But I think that you did the same
Hear the beating of my heart in your ears
I feel your breath in the wind
--You're so far away

(Chorus)
But maybe the dawn will break and I'll see you smiling there again
And the old sad memories that seem to repeat will be wiped away
The eastern star will draw the curtain for the silvered lining to appear
And dance a rubied parade across the day
Even on a cloudy day I'd see the sun

Even on a cloudy day I'd see the sun
Even on a cloudy day I'd see the sun

BJH
4/9/2006
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Old 2006-04-10, 21:02
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
No shadows cast on the grass beneath the moonlit clouds
Just my heart cast into the darkness all alone


The second sentence of that seems a lil odd cause you put the word cast in it too. But thats just something i noticed.


This is intresting, i liked the chorus and the repeated lines.
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Old 2006-04-10, 23:10
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I was doing a minor play on the words using them both like that.
Thanks for the comments. Glad you liked it, too.
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!

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