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2006-04-09, 18:46
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short song (again, don't know what to title it)
Transcendence.
Your death as a prelude to your life
Eating at the back of your head.
You stare at your glossy red limbs scattered.
You have a beautiful smile.
Show some teeth.
Drink it. you’ll like it.
Why'd I do this?
'Cause I wanted to.
Empty eyes staring into themselves
The monster inside the man.
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2006-04-09, 19:39
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Originally Posted by newHELLonEARTH
Transcendence.
Your death as a prelude to your life
Eating at the back of your head.
You stare at your glossy red limbs scattered.
You have a beautiful smile.
Show some teeth.
Drink it. you’ll like it.
Why'd I do this?
'Cause I wanted to.
Empty eyes staring into themselves
The monster inside the man.
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2006-04-09, 19:52
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That made a big difference. I like it. You're getting pretty creepy though. Your writing, I mean.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-04-09, 19:54
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Hehe, thanks. Kinda the angle I'm getting at, yeah it was a good idea to change the verses around, I'm happy with the results.
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2006-04-09, 21:19
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That's good. It's still all yours, but the impact is stronger.  Are you guys gonna record it sometime?
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-04-09, 22:27
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Well, we're (me and Zertonimo..heh) working hard on a song, guitarwise, and once that's done we'll put those lyrics in. Growled, of course.
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