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Old 2006-04-04, 08:55
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heres a few from an old scrapbook

theses are old, like 4 years old, ive kinda touched them up

[broken landscape]

where bandana gang controlled boulevards
are covered in trash+jesus saves cards
some shell of an man offers
sandwich board salvation upon
a red light district annihilation
radiation jesus A bomb will soon come!


glass screen shrine eminates the ultimate fuck all
of puppet show press conference soothsayers guided
by telepromter oracles puke rubbish,proxy,doublethink,verbatim
watch the live feed of auguries now divined from the entrails of an annihilation
update the hate!

our Ignorance, a machine vitue of statecraft

[waves of slime]

words were softly spoken with a rain of surgical steel destruction
hepititus freedom floods broken streets to consume disposible lives
divine mandate delivered behind the barrel of a gun
its virtue flows like a river of bile, your virtue flows like a river of bile

no obstruction to the path of the bileflow

i had a political bent to my writings in the past. and everything was the biggest run on sentence because i pictured these as lyrics to songs
Old 2006-04-04, 11:36
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I especially liked Soothsayer. The others weren't bad though either. There's a lot of truth in them. Thanks for sharing.
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
Old 2006-04-04, 20:31
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yep, my teenage angst lasted till i was 25

the first one may be vague, but its about something i witnessed in boston when i was young in the 80's, when boston wasnt so clean and high tech like it is now. it was the first time i seen a guy wear a sandwich board, basically two pieces of ply-wood harnessed over his torso with images of flames and something written about nuclear war and armageddon.

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