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Old 2006-03-27, 19:27
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The Enthroning of Death

Bedarken the future foreseen
Usurper of conscious existence
Who bears the mark of fate
Inevibility born in being
Divine conqueror of souls
Whose essence thrives within antithesis
And who shall remain
When the illusion has ceased
A creeping shadow of twisted malignancy
Manifested in our every breath
Hearts beat defiantly to their master
Finite to the iron omen
And yet, blinded by dismayed eyes
Fixiated on voids of abstraction
When dwelling in our destined paths
Is enshrined in our mortal flesh!
Old 2006-03-27, 19:39
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Not bad not bad, I liked the word use. I always attempt to write.. (something like that) and i always become too literal. But hey thats what has gotten me where i am. hah

Word use = Good
Originally Posted by Darko
...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
About requiem. Aint it the truth...
Old 2006-03-27, 21:20
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A bit heady to me, but there's nothing wrong with that. It seemed to flow okay and wasn't tedious to read. Not bad at all.
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
Old 2006-03-28, 22:05
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Old 2006-04-02, 17:34
Hippy :)
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im not gonna lie,
half the world in this i had to look up.
but after that, fuckin awesome. i wish i was literate
Originally Posted by Darko
Sweep picking is like having sex with a virgin. You've got to start out slow and pay attention. Don't get blood on the bed. Don't hurt her too much. Make sure the condom dosen't tear. Keep asking if she's "okay".
Old 2006-04-03, 01:02
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pretty fuckin good man!
i dont play metal, i play wood
R.I.P Rick D

Originally Posted by BeastOfCarrion
Get 'chuppa chup' (like the lolly pops) tattooed down you dick. That will impress the ladies.

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