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The Enthroning of Death

2006-03-27, 19:27

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The Enthroning of Death

Bedarken the future foreseen
Usurper of conscious existence
Who bears the mark of fate
Inevibility born in being
Divine conqueror of souls
Whose essence thrives within antithesis
And who shall remain
When the illusion has ceased
A creeping shadow of twisted malignancy
Manifested in our every breath
Hearts beat defiantly to their master
Finite to the iron omen
And yet, blinded by dismayed eyes
Fixiated on voids of abstraction
When dwelling in our destined paths
Is enshrined in our mortal flesh!

2006-03-27, 19:39

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Not bad not bad, I liked the word use. I always attempt to write.. (something like that) and i always become too literal. But hey thats what has gotten me where i am. hah

Word use = Good

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2006-03-27, 21:20

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A bit heady to me, but there's nothing wrong with that. It seemed to flow okay and wasn't tedious to read. Not bad at all.

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2006-03-28, 22:05

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Nice!

2006-04-02, 17:34

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im not gonna lie,
half the world in this i had to look up.
but after that, fuckin awesome. i wish i was literate

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2006-04-03, 01:02

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pretty fuckin good man!

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