*DISCLAIMER: If you dont like sappy love poems, this might piss you off*

i remember a time
when i held and i
looked into your eyes
seeing something
that i never saw before
i remember a time
when it clicked
inside my mind
holding you and
kissing you
i knew right then
i loved you

and the memories never fade
as i lie awake at night
trying to forget
for the sake of my sanity
i always come to the conclusion
that i had it all and failed

i remember a time
wanting you more than
i ever thought i could
feeling things
i never thought were real
i remember a time
needing you more than
the air i need
to breathe
i felt so alive
its gone

and this dust never settles
cus your voice is always
blowing in my mind
and every time i go to let go
you smile and im yours again
for the very first time

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*sigh* That was so nice. Very melancholy and romantic like a love letter written never to be sent. It's a very common feeling and you handled it bluntly and beautifully. It would make a nice acoustic piece or even something like The Scorpions or The Cure with more music going on.
I have a friend that's feeling just about this way lately.

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i could see a cure type sound going with it, ill see what i can do

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im bumping this up, im hoping some other people will comment on it, i need some criticism, be it positive or negative, and with that i mean serious criticism, not "that was T3H GH3Y, ITS NOT T3H BR00T4LZ"

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