First song is about the new abortion pill they are trying to ban in Australia, second one is how if we didn't pity and have suicide in our faces all the fucking time in magazines and in music, if we were unaware of suicides presence, people would no longer do it, the idea is planted by media [same as self harm and self destructive behaviour]. I don't care if you agree with these concepts, just read them and tell me what you think.

Automatic Abortion

[1]
They are trying to stop
This pill from being produced,
Which eliminates the need for contraception being used
Someone said "We're aborting ourselves out of existence."
All of this, it must be stopped before the population gets too old

[2]
And if the pill is sold
Who will defend our country then?
When there is no young and bold.

[1]
I say "Who cares."
We are running out of land
So we must build upon ourselves
Higher buildings above the sand
People stacked in apartment blocks like books inside shelves
Abortion pills will do just right to get the problem solved

[3]
Pass the bill
Take the pill
Automatically aborted
It had no say
She gets her way
Automatically aborted

[1]
Buildings are just tombstones
Waiting for a freak
And if a girl is too young
If she is too weak
She could see a doctor
And get the pill she needs
Or if the girl was raped
She could abort the evil seeds

[4]
They are taking this right away
So we will have to pay
Surgical abortion fees
If we just have our way
And pills are all we pay
Zygotes to our knees

[3]
Pass the bill
Take the pill
Automatically aborted
It had no say
She gets her way
Automatically aborted

[2]
Without defence we will all fall
And I can't wait to watch it all
ABORTED

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Supporting Suicide

[1]
Suicide is advertised
Made publicly aware
In music and advertisements
Or mags about health care

[2]
Attention whores, the way it goes these days
With 'Emotional' music promoting different ways

[3]
Supported suicide
You cannot hide
Promoted everywhere
We should be unaware

[2]
Keep killing yourselves because you're weak
I'm laughing - not the sympathy you seek

[3]
Supported suicide
You cannot hide
Promoted everywhere
We should be unaware

[4]
As long as it's still cool
To take your own life
You're out of my way
Ceasant to my strife
Keep dying, while trying
To attract my attention
You have it, I'm smiling
Feeding your intention

[1]
Keep thinking you're misuderstood
Or it's cool to be depressed
You look at me and you will see
I am far from impressed

[2]
Suicide, portrayed in music scenes
Suicide, in all our magazines

[3]
Supported suicide
You cannot hide
Promoted everywhere
We should be unaware

They sound very rappish to me like they should be spoken. Structure and flow was fine. You get your feelings across about the topics, but I think you'll run into some much broader ideas from them. Since you said you didn't care about agreement of the subjects I won't offer an opinion.

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No, I like disussion about it, I meant I don't care that you don't agree, as in, go ahead and post what you mean, it dosn't bother me. Although you probably won't change my mind I'd like to hear others opinions on the topics.

Okay, I'll try to make it short. I've read about the abortion pills and heard they cause a lot of violent pains for days after they're used. I also think that they could be a good alternative in dire circumstances, rape, or incest cases. I don't think they should be dished out to anyone that wants them just because they had sex and got pregnant.

Suicide has a lot of faces other than the "emo" ones that are so prevalent. The sensationalism that some have, like entertainers, I can't see as being reason for a following. Some of the uses for the word or idea of "suicide" in songs doesn't even mean it literally, but some aren't smart enough to figure that out or they find out after some type damage is already done.

I think you just touched on small areas of each subject. Maybe with more thought and knowledge you'll come up more.

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I'm not gonna comment on the topics.. but rather say i like both songs. Mostly because of the way its presented. I'm definately a person thats all about.. the in your face kinda songs, and messages to others.

I like

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