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2006-02-15, 04:20
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I am a tax on the world..
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Die!!!!!!!!!!!
....change of pace...this one is rhythmatic by syllable.
From death to Rebirth
Rage in all the world
Faced with hate
Cursed by fate
Seven sins to hurl
I am the anti-christ
Not by will
But Satan's thrill
As his bells ring thrice
From the depths I come
My veins are coarse
My hand is forced
To justify the scum
Raise the dead to help
On death we feed
We burn and bleed
Let these bodies melt
Silence rules the Earth
Empty for
The blessed moor
Waiting for rebirth
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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2006-02-15, 04:26
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I like the different rthythm patteren. Very sexy.
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2006-02-15, 05:33
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I like this alot. I'm interested how this would behind some music. (if that even be the case) but i really like the
I am the anti-christ
Not by will
But Satan's thrill
As his bells ring thrice
Reminds me of a few songs i've written. In fact my entire cd is almost based off of the unconcious wills, maybe placed by.. say.. "satan."
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2006-02-15, 11:17
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Originally Posted by Tulvox
I like the different rthythm patteren. Very sexy.
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That's just cuz you think powers' is cuddly. 
Good meter. It took a minute to get it in the 4th stanza, but I just went back and read a couple other 1st lines and got it. It's not bad. It's a bit different from your usual. The 3rd part was a little different concept so that had a little spark to it.
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2006-02-15, 16:30
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nice, i could definitely imagine that in a slayer song. angel of death came to mind when i read this
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2006-02-15, 18:03
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Thanks guys, I like the first and second ones myself.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2006-02-15, 18:57
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nice, i could definitely imagine that in a slayer song. angel of death came to mind when i read this
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