This is by my "br00tal" death metal solo band, Fatal Enslavement.

Divided

Forcefully put this negativity upon you
Unacceptably drag this down to you
For your deeds that you have done
For the “wars” you have one..

Divided by faith
Don’t stop fighting spit up the blood (spit up the blood)
In the this worlds defeat spit up the blood ( Spit out the blood)

In the beginning this failed deviation was created
In the ending this project was destroyed by the creations
Creations that can no longer create, and always hesitate
The world in its downfall ruled by us…

Divided by faith
Don’t stop fighting spit up the blood (spit up the blood)
In the this worlds defeat spit up the blood ( Spit out the blood)

Bring
Down
Creator

Divided by faith
Don’t stop fighting spit up the blood (spit up the blood)
In the this worlds defeat spit up the blood ( Spit out the blood)

See the world untie as the immortal bonds are broken
Watch as your lord is dragged out of heaven
The look on his face when he see we have won
Proving god wrong! The ending of existence!

Divided by faith
Don’t stop fighting spit up the blood (spit up the blood)
In the this worlds defeat spit up the blood ( Spit out the blood)
I watched the creation, I watched its incineration

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I suppose the repetition in it would be good for the type of lyric it is, but it didn't seem to have much to make it unique. It might be okay for enciting a riotous atmosphere of a crowd concertwise, but that's about all. The structure you used was okay though and it did have flow to the lines so do keep writing.

Can I ask what you meant in your description by a death metal solo band? The solo part is what confused me.

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Well I do vocals in a death metal band, but I also play guitar, not in the band. So I got bored one day and started working on some music just for me, its weird and pitch shifted. Unlike my actual band. So this is a solo project mainly, and I have a few freinds who help me do stuff, like drums on ceartin tracks, and backing vocals on some.

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I see. Somehow that idea just didn't register. Thanks for the clarification.

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