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Old 2006-01-29, 21:43
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Old school thrash song

You probably won't like these lyrics, lbxxx, cause they're not my old style. I wrote this is for my college old-school-thrash band, a mixture of Death, Megadeath, Iron Maiden, and Anthrax.


Dispair the Nameless

Verse 1:
Pumped with hate from destructive dreams
For that which I need in sight
These things that walk all around
I hate them all
Why can't you see? We have no worth
Our fate is sealed, so what are we waiting for

Chorus:
Wide awake such as my fucking nightmare
Kill all that stand in our way
Sin with me and then we'll be done
With destroying all the world!

Haven't gotten to the 2nd or 3rd verse yet, and the song structure is as follows:

intro
main riff

|: pre verse
verse
2 filler riffs
chorus
main riff:| (repeat)

interlude
solo riff 1
solo riff 2
post solo
main riff
pre verse
verse 3
filler riffs
chorus
main riff
outro


Or.....not repeat and go directly into the interlude after the first chorus. I havn't decided yet. Our songs do both.
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Old 2006-01-30, 01:56
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Well, get your skinny ass out of here and get to writing more of the song!! You're such a tease!! Good chorus, but get your balls in motion and write more to solidify what's in the first and only, at this point, verse, you vile vermin. You've got a strong first line in the verse so give more in the others.
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