Smile at me with a gun in your face.
Ready to feel the carbons embrace.
Ready to take the lead in your head.
Ready to taste the kiss of the dead.

The bullets load,
Makes your face implode.
And upon departure,
Your head explodes.

Bone and brain splattered all around.
Lifeless body hits the ground.
A painless death, you took your last breath,
Left you dead in the street to be found.

In a blackened bag,
Entwined with a zip,
To the morgue,
A hastey trip.

They never found me and the never found gun.
And to tell you the truth it was such fun
Being on the team that found your remains.
I'm a paramedic that has gone insane.

Are you sure that's not emo? hehe Oh, that was morbidly delicious! I wouldn't change a thing except the spelling of hasty.

Have you ever listened to Stephen Lynch?

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Uhmmmmm No I havn't I don't even know who he is

I know Liam Lynch though - WHATEVER! dundudundundundundund I was walking down the street wearing my leather and some guy comes up to me and he's like Hey Punk and I'm like WHATEVER!!! Dududududdududud

He doesn't get as violent (that I've heard yet) in his songs, but he can get pretty gross and yet have that edgy humor. I found this that way.

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stephen lynch is god.

special fred
his momma dropped him on his head
now he thinks hes A PIECE OF BREAAAADDDDD
he's a little bit special

the rhyming immediately drew me into your song, but rhyming of implode and explode and other rhymes kinda made me go "meh...." if you know what i mean. also the whole brain splattering thing was kinda poiintless (i always thought gore lyrics were amazingly retarded) but id give it a 7.75/10. good job

but yeah youd definitely like stephen lynch - hes a comedian who plays hilarious songs instead of doing regular stand up. you can also buy his albums, and they are well worth the money