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Old 2006-01-20, 12:11
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sunshine, trust
but now you will be here in spirit
i kept a number close to my heart
two suns burning green in the sky
i will never forget when they fell on mine
ashes and dust
 
Old 2006-01-20, 13:07
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Why green? And 99% has a specific meaning to me, too.
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Old 2006-01-20, 13:12
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She had the most beautifully coloured eyes I have ever seen. Not just an ordinary shade of green, they were so beautiful, I have never seen a colour like it.

You guessed the 99% bit I take it...
 
Old 2006-01-20, 14:48
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Well, I doubt our 99%'s are the same thing, but it was neat you used that.

Well, I've got the prettiest green eyes there ever have been so they'd have to be something wonderful. I was told I had cat's eyes, but that guy is an Elvis impersonator now. lol
That's cool though. Thanks for the explanation. You have some light and dark imagery in this piece for it being so brief.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2006-01-20, 14:51
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I like brief ones, its definitely the way to go if its not a song I think. Obviously this and any other prose piece [is it prose?] like this isn't a song.
 
Old 2006-01-20, 22:05
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no ones going to be able to see a number then % and not think of dillinger anymore dude... 43% burnt
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