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2006-01-19, 14:02
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Life is pain.
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Freedom
breaking out of the cell
iron bars
deep red
found myself looking back
contemplate the past
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2006-01-19, 14:03
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so you break out of jail and want to go back? or what? I'm not sure what your trying to say
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"And he piled upon the whale's white hump, the sum of all the hate and rage fely by his race. If his chest had been a cannon, he would have shot his heart upon it."
Sanasta sana tulevi, kipinästä maa kytevi
Gallowmere
Our Stuff
Reavers Lament
Snowfall
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2006-01-19, 18:58
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Originally Posted by Infinity
breaking out of the cell
iron bars
deep red
found myself looking back
contemplate the past
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2006-01-20, 03:15
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Intresting. I definately like the... words used for such a short space. Although it definately leaves me asking similar questions and making similar statements.
Good
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...Its very annoying to keep having to hear some socially-disabled teen come on these boards talking about all the drugs he's started doing so that he can maybe grasp onto some kind of positive response so he feels better about himself and what he's doing.
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About requiem. Aint it the truth... |
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2006-01-20, 03:23
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Life is pain.
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2006-01-20, 11:41
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lol It sounds like a dramatic bit that would be used in a commercial for a show. Words and then a bit of riviting music and repeat. I suppose if I'm hearing it in that context it could be a good bridge for a concept bit of writing and then that could answer some of the questions others' asked. Or it could still remain a mystery. For short and sweet it does allow the reader a lot of visual play. Not bad.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-01-20, 11:59
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Life is pain.
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Well I'm going to dissapoint alot of people by saying it's about love. Most [not all, check Reality, Molested in Your Sleep, etc.] are about love.
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2006-01-20, 13:04
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I've got an ear to ear grin. It's so cool to see the author's comments on a piece that brings it into the real perspective. Unlike reading something of a dead author in a textbook that people can only speculate as best as they can about what something means.
I'll have to go back and reread your other pieces.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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