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2006-01-12, 18:47
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Narcosis
"Narcosis"
Dig your own grave,
it's the only way to cease the pain,
the hurt of isolation and anxiety,
take your gifts given to you by society.
Drug your struggling,
down the hole you go tumbling,
intoxicating paralysis satisfied,
the proof manifests in your eyes.
Accused of using future resigning excuses,
balancing perseverence and pleasure on the needle of life.
Deadly intentions and dwindling inhibitions,
the abused usage will bring retribution,
ending your life due to the chronic doses,
dying in a state of narcosis.
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Wore her out before I could finish(which im grateful for)
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Funeral Mulch; My brutal death metal band from West Michigan.
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Cool piece. Very heavy lyrically and it would be good with some heavy vocals and music.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-01-12, 22:48
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Cool piece. Very heavy lyrically and it would be good with some heavy vocals and music.
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Thanks. It used to be a song me and an old band played, I wrote it myslef.
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2006-01-12, 23:37
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It had the feeling of Suicide Note Pt. 1 by Pantera. That's the feel I was getting from it with really heavy undertones. Really good on the writing. Keep it up, but don't make the past the future. 
Rock on
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-01-12, 23:45
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Oh I know.
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Wore her out before I could finish(which im grateful for)
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Funeral Mulch; My brutal death metal band from West Michigan. |
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2006-01-13, 01:05
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We know some of your history so I think some of us can see more into a lyric like that. Do you think that you can tap into those resources even though they aren't part of your life now or would you even want to?
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2006-01-13, 01:40
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Yeah, I can still tap into it, no problem.
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A little section of Requiem's "I finally got laid" posts.
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Funeral Mulch; My brutal death metal band from West Michigan. |
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