Hope of the Dead

Life is born and Life ceases from the world as if it has never breathed,
Death has vanished in allusion.

When the irrational nonsensical ones rule the world,
The intelligent are forgotten,
In an abyss crowded of puzzling faces.

The meaning of life is to learn,
From those who had to experience.
The meaning of life is to experience,
For those that are unacquainted.

It is a line,
That should form a circle,
But it never finds its own end.

It is thee imperfection,
That nature is unbalanced,
And still knowing the fact,
Seems nothing to revolutionize in this derisory world.

It will all guide to our own destruction,
And the worst,
It will lead to the end of earth’s nature,
Which took uncountable years to become what it is now.

Nature has found a way to close the circle,
Thee broke it.

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very very good. the circle not finding it's tail bit is quite good

heh, you know some english words i dont ! derisory?

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ask a rather non-sensical question and you get back a non-sensical answer

^^ that is derisory

in other words, ridiculous

thx man!

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please comment this one more.... for it shall not drown in unawareness

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Sometimes I have to come back to a piece and reread. I liked that circle bit the first time I read it. A interesting idea of the world being like a slinky (spiral) that if the ends did meet would all of a sudden not be as we know it any longer. Would that really be good or bad though? Just pondering.
The first lines are what got me today. If not for thought and memory the world would just be.
The thought flow was good and I liked the way it made me think of other ideas. I'm curious about the references to "thee." Is that a specific entity and if so, whom or what?

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If the ends would meet, humanity and nature would balance each other out. In other words, in todays time, humanity destroys nature, and with it, its own kind. But when humans, would take more thought into their future proceedings and acts, both nature and humanity, will be able to develope, and humans would become that, what they were supposed to be... animals!

This would be certainly a good thing!

A way to get the ends to meet, would be to learn from those, who already lived. The thoughts of a single person itself, has to gain in importance, in order to bring humanity on the right track...

hope you understand my point here.... It is a complex topic and I think this has never been talked about... It is more a new Thoery, primitive as it is right now, to life a better live!

With "Thee" I mean the Humans. Humanity itself, as it is today.

thank you for your feedback!

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Okay, since we had a rather indepth msn conversation about this I was trying to think of an example of a people who could live closer to nature without straying so far from it. The closest I could come was certain American Indians or others around the world that put back into nature what they've removed without greed or superiority being involved. I don't think it's as prevalent today as maybe 100 or so years ago, but there are some who still at least know how to do that should their lifestyle require them to revert back to it.

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oh yes indeed! American Indians live the life I was talking about! But it is impossible to ask the rest of humanity to go down in development and become like the Indian Americans. People in todays time cannot live anymore without a car, a computer etc.

We have already gone to far...

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