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2005-12-22, 08:33

Reficul

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Help please?

I'm writing a song about Cthulhu and i'm stuck at part of the second verse. Can anyone suggest anything?

The first part of it is:

Revel across the world
Ravening for delight
Crush all who stand in the way
Of your grand design

Can anyone think of something to write for the next four lines?

2005-12-22, 08:52

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Cthulhu is old
Cthulhu is boring
Write about Cthulhu
If you want me snoring.

2005-12-22, 11:54

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Other than hearing the song, I couldn't tell you a thing to collaborate on your piece. Sorry!

If you're at a loss for more to the piece maybe it's not a good topic to write about right now. Write about other things you know more about or read more about your subject and you may get some inspiration that's unique to amke your subject interesting. Try it from different points of view, too, and not just head on.

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2005-12-22, 12:02

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Well, I was writing pretty good up until that point and then my mind went blank and I realized "what the fuck else am I going to write about?". Perhaps it will come to me later. Thanks anyway.

2005-12-22, 13:17

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I hate when that happens. Sometimes just saving it for awhile and relooking at it hours or days later can make a big difference. Good luck anyways.

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2005-12-22, 13:29

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Maybe you need more information about that topic. Or you can spend like an hour brain storming than interweave those ideas. That is what I always do. Or maybe you'r not inspired enough about that topic. Which reminds me of the two Cradle of Filth songs in Midian and one Metallica song which are about Cthulhu.

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2005-12-22, 17:33

Reficul

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Yeah Cradle of Filth had Dawn of Cthulhu and Metallica had The Call of Cthulhu. I'm just writing this to honor H.P. Lovecraft. I pretty much know all there is to know about the topic. I've gotten so far through the song that i've run out of ideas. I'm just gonna wait until something comes to me. It always does, eventually. Thanks for your help.

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