Here is a concept song called "The Masked Red Phantom" I wrote and the ideas of it where aroused when my girl friend left me forever (not died but left the country I'm in). I know it is dam long but the song is 10 minutes. It follows a storyline I made up (that is why it is long).
When the scourge mowed in lands beyond the sea
Plebs reaped like overgrown weed
Withdrawn castle on a soaring mountain
Enshrouded in deep hazy woods through the vales
Alone we dwell, with her beauty
An ornament to the desolate chambers
An emblem of eerie charm
In magic spell, she weaves incantations
Enchanting tuneful melodies
Ingrained deeply in my mind, she flows like a stream
Reflecting on the river surface
My spirit she frees, envious angels
She drowns them in their tears to weep blood in Sodom
Raged voracious jealousy for her soul
Sleeping beauty…
She will be mine
Dominions bent in obeisance at our command
Voluptuous pleasure possession of their souls
Hale populace pervaded amid the castle
To lapse the dreary hours
The countess baleful smiles
Curved evil upon her countenance
Shrieks of pain swell the castle walls
In the land abroad
Therein church bells toll their chimes and owls screech dirge hymns
Casting knights to plunder unwholesome hordes
Raze and burn strongholds till debris, kill
Blazing fires illumines the heaven
Pyres reaps the earth
Sinless children wail in despair
Charred fruits hang on scorched trees
Insanity poisons the wind
Bodily pores weeping bright red
Drained pale, putrid corpse odor
Spilling bowel sputum
Murderous fury
In the eerie chamber
That dismay even the bold
Blood tainted panes and black carpets
Stood erect the sable clock
Wherein the clock brass bell chime melodies
(Wherein the clock brass bell ring their melodies)
The midnight hour rouses the figure
The Masked Red Phantom Prince
Angel or Devil
What dost ye desire
The Maiden whore quoth the ghost
Masked Red Phantom
Clothed in black grave garments
Strangeness in thy eyes
Disclose thy mask said I
The midnight chime, it invokes
Whence to her chamber wherein she dreams in placid sleep
Crept thee so silently
Death kiss to her lips, a pale hue
Her eyelids closed an icy corpse
A rose upon her bed cover
She thither to the morbid chamber
To lay beneath her death bed sheets
Sleeping beauty…
She will be mine
How quickly beauty comes to an end
The withered rose petals
How I wish t’was me
