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2005-12-17, 06:33
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Lo, they do call to me...
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home
if home
is where
the heart is
then someone
take
me
home
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2005-12-17, 07:30
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its a bit short
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Im a quadraplegic.
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Metal Monkey: retarded comments galore.
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2005-12-17, 10:51
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Lo, they do call to me...
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it is so on purpose
poetry isnt about length, its about making sure each word is perfect, its a bit of an experimental poem of mine, usually i go longer
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2005-12-17, 12:11
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HES BAAACK
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ummmmmmmmmm
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www.myspace.com/crownedmusic
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2005-12-17, 13:52
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i liked it...simple and effective. 
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R.I.P. Mieszko Talarczyk
1974 - 2004
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2005-12-17, 14:23
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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I loved that. Very nice.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-12-17, 17:57
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I am a tax on the world..
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Sounds more like the beginning of a sonnet for your chick, though there seems to be a couple accidental typos when you kept hitting the enter key.. 
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-12-17, 18:30
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It would make a nice little chorus for a song.
Speaking of sonnets, I gotta pm you powers'.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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