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2005-12-08, 05:40
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I am a tax on the world..
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Misanthrope
Fly through space into the ancient times
Lies a kingdom scorned of many years
Monumental it is, with thorned walls
Element of war renouned for vehemence
Escape the captivity of human being
Kill the seeds that spawn our race
Seek the conclusion of life on Earth
And touch the light in the dark of night
Of flesh and blood I will be no more
Possessed with hate I have departed
From this skeletal self slowly dying
Covered in hell I rise towards the heavens
When you have sworn in your oath
Called out to the destructive roars of night
You might catch a glimpse of me in the dark
Eyes glowing red with diminishing features of man
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
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2005-12-09, 00:45
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The way it began in the first line made the second line sound uncomfortable to me. Just a thought.
Fly through space into the ancient times
A kingdom lies scorned of many years
I loved the lines--
"From this skeletal self slowly dying
Covered in hell I rise towards the heavens."
The rest wasn't bad. I could really hear it growled. It had some imagery in it, but I think some more storyline would be cool if you could think of something original.
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Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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2005-12-09, 16:52
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I am a tax on the world..
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cool, thanks.
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-12-10, 14:48
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its pretty cool, unforuntalty Dimurgos next album is almost strongly based of Lord of the Rings and the midevil times... I would have used Chronicals of Narnia... but theirs so much Christianity bullshit plauging it.
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2005-12-10, 15:47
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What's the connection between that and this?
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-12-10, 16:27
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I am a tax on the world..
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heh, yeah that was pretty random... 
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-12-11, 12:39
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hay that was pretty cool
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