Here's a song I wrote, I hope you enjoy it. Its sorta brutal, but nothing to hardcore.

Cryptography

Better find me
All I leave behind is the pieces I don’t eat
And photographs, from their not so pleasant past
What the fuck you think im joking?
Chocking, on a piece of bone from this stiff
Intestines strewn about the room, their children wake in horror
Not a pleasant surprise
to wake and see their heads hanging from the ceiling fan

If they don’t want to live
Then why make them stay
Not like I will give them a choice anyway
Pre-mortem slit up the stomach
As the other one watched in horror
No nymphetamine, to cease his pain
The look on is wife’s face in vein

The next, hung by her ankles
Mouth Duct tape Shut
I ripped her entrails out her cunt
And forced them through the hole I gashed in her throat
Knife slit her stomach open
As the blood ran out
I take these photos, and leave them here for you to know my stages
I’m like a virus, my sting is contagious there will be more

Feasting on their corpses
white floor now red with blood
Break in, in the night
You’ll never know till its to late
I guarantee I’ll kill again
Better find me


Heres just something i wrote when i got realy bored no sence in making two topics. Its vary grindcore...

You Fucking Loser

Trash, you fucking loser
STOLE MY FUCKING VAN
My fucking van you fucking loser
FUCK
Next time I see you I will be in your face like Ed Gein
Your asshole will get ripped like the boys of Dauhmer
Ill kick you in the fucking eye sockets and rape you
You'l be a parapeledjict when im through with you

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Not my thing, but even if it was it's choppy and some of the words aren't spelled right which makes it take more effort to read, too. I'm not a good critic for something like these. If the story was there more and there was more psychology of a killer there I might be more interested, but it's just "shock rock" to me. Maybe next time.

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meh i wrote that in 5 minutes, so i wasnt expecting it to be a chart topper, number one badass song. Anyways, not much of a shock rock fan, and i would barely call my band that, but yeah, its kind of lame reading stuff sober.

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Well, that's cool. If you can write unsober you can do it sober so try it and I'll read that, too.

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