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Old 2005-10-17, 02:10
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Jacob Fitzlaff

I swore I'd protect you,
From the filth of society.
What are you now?
That which I fought against.

I swore you were the one.
We dreamed of the future.
Were those lies you whispered?
Did they make you feel better?

I swore I'd rip his fucking eyes out.
And I did.
Now I have a blind friend.
What good was it?

I swore I'd love you,
For a lifetime.
My mistake.
Are you dead yet?

I'll tell you what good it was.

I swore I'd protect you.
And I did, and still do.

I swore you were the one.
I still wake up and see you.

I swore I'd kill him.
He's dead and we aren't.

I swore I'd love you.
And I forgive you.

Love, Jake.
Worker bees can leave,
Even drones can fly away.
The queen is their slave.
Old 2005-10-17, 19:30
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Doggone it! Are you getting emo on us? NOO! I don't know if I like it or not. Seems more of a rant and RATM is playing here in teh background so that's not helping me be objective. It's so sparsely worded. It's getting a point across, but it just isn't as memorable as some of your other pieces.
Sounds like Tullie is upset for sure though.
My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!

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