
2005-10-17, 02:10
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Minnesota
Posts: 1,136
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"Protector"
"Protector"
Jacob Fitzlaff
10/16/05
I swore I'd protect you,
From the filth of society.
What are you now?
That which I fought against.
I swore you were the one.
We dreamed of the future.
Were those lies you whispered?
Did they make you feel better?
I swore I'd rip his fucking eyes out.
And I did.
Now I have a blind friend.
What good was it?
I swore I'd love you,
For a lifetime.
My mistake.
Are you dead yet?
I'll tell you what good it was.
I swore I'd protect you.
And I did, and still do.
I swore you were the one.
I still wake up and see you.
I swore I'd kill him.
He's dead and we aren't.
I swore I'd love you.
And I forgive you.
Love, Jake.
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Worker bees can leave,
Even drones can fly away.
The queen is their slave.
www.maddox.xmission.com
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2005-10-17, 19:30
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Doggone it! Are you getting emo on us? NOO! I don't know if I like it or not. Seems more of a rant and RATM is playing here in teh background so that's not helping me be objective. It's so sparsely worded. It's getting a point across, but it just isn't as memorable as some of your other pieces.
Sounds like Tullie is upset for sure though.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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