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Old 2005-10-12, 10:09
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J.

Hiding
Behind
Faultless
Shield.
Take a
Deep breath.
Realise
The deal.
Get it straight.
Get it right.

Don't lie to my face.

I am
Older
Than that.
I can
Handle
That shit.
Be a
Grown man.

I don't wanna hear it
When your faking shit.
I don't care if you drop it
When your shunning me back.
I don't need a reason
Just the right answer.

"Myles
Merritt.
One of
My friends."
Don't you
Talk shit
I don't believe in coincidence.

Please don't tolerate me.
Tell me to fuck off.
I don't want to be fooling myself.
Whispers when I'm turned
And faces look away.
Destiny awaits!

Cunt! - Fuck you and who you are.
Corruption, I won't stand for this.
I see through you like you're glass.
Bullets pund, won't miss, promise!

Eyes of god are watching you.
You claim that you are one of them.
Tote a knife in Adelaide.
"Kill a black, kill a gay."

I see what you really are.
Nothing but a pessimist.
Misanthrope, you're trying hard!
Men like you - Death comes quick.
 
Old 2005-10-12, 12:07
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I haven't heard a reference to Adelaide in awhile. What inspired this?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2005-10-12, 12:31
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This is about a guy I treated as a much better friend than what he considers me, but he acted like we were best friends. He once told me a story how he was about to stab a black in Adelaide.
 
Old 2005-10-14, 22:07
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I think it's highly personal. Parts could be a generalized song about the incidents you mentioned, but then there's the parts of you in it that make it more one on one. I do like the way you structured it. I didn't see anything that needed rewording really. You got the tone across quite well. I'm getting a Pantera-like vibe for a sound for it if it's to be a song.

Thanks for the background on it, too.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2005-10-16, 08:55
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Actually if you would manage to get a handle of a certain song, Astral Abortis by Sadistik Exekution, it's alot like what I wrote this, cos it was a good influence.

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