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Old 2005-10-10, 12:02
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Cheesy Bacon [don't wanna name it]

I'm no mind reader.
But I'm good at this game.
"What I know is what I see.
But is what I see the truth?"
You know I'm the model cynic of our generation.
I'm the critic.
This is it: I think it but I don't show it.
I'll keep going til it's definate.
You know, evidence?
I'll think it but I won't know it,
Whats this face looking away from me?
What is it telling me?
Is it a mirror reflecting what it wants me to see,
and not what I want to see.
I want to see the truth.
Can you show me the truth?

Deceit is a common enemy.
And more common, an ally against the enemy.
But when the target is not the enemy,
That's deceit used needlessly.

Sitting on the bed looking into her eyes,
I made the attack to her surprise,
I asked her questions she had no answer to.
Was she scared or unable to?

Is it what I thought
Just put into play?
The cynic in me does me right again?
I cannot say I had my hopes up.
You know I still have no answers.

A play within a play.
Take a look in the mirror then take a look out the window.
It's a full time movie with free seats.
Sit back and watch the world slowly tear itself apart,
Just like what my brain did to my heart.

Last edited by Infinity : 2005-10-10 at 12:05.
 
Old 2005-10-10, 19:22
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good shit
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Old 2005-10-11, 15:20
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With the exception of the last line that changed the feel of the piece completely I liked it a lot. The last line sounded too blase for the rest of the wittiness in the piece. Even though you didn't title it I liked that heading you gave it. That's pretty imaginative.

Glad you shared this.
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Old 2005-10-12, 00:12
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Yeah.. that last line wasn't the best but it sure didn't bring the whole thing down i liked it. Hah.. Bobbi, I'm not even close to finishing Piecmeal Peace. if you don't remember, it's the unfinished song i sent via PM
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Old 2005-10-12, 13:26
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hahhahah cool "tittle"
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