I made this up impormptu because I was bored

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Brutalised body battered, tattered broken bleeding
Lifes wish is to be seen disrespecting headless dead,
I'll take you thru the steps of my brutal engineering,
Decollating torsos - it's a lust that must be fed...

By the hair,
I dragged him here,
And he stared,
As I steer,
Walked him through,
Then I throw,
Into gloom,
Out of glow,
KICKING AND SCREAMING I TOOK HIM TO MY ABODE!

Gagged and bound in chains I broke his face with such distaste
Mangled nose and fucked up bones weapons I chose were heavy stones
Lying on the ground I dropped them on his face until it breaks
This stupid runt became my hunt, it's now I cut him a new cunt -
[This is how I done it]

Hammer claw on his balls the penis burst it must have hurt
I stuck it in and with a grin it ripped it off as if nothing
With the same claw which begged for more and when I saw half broken jaw
I broke it off and it unhinged blood he choked on would make you cringe

WITH A JIGSAW I CUT HIS FUCKING LIMBS OFF!

His arms
In the air,
Do I look
Like I care
Blood
Everywhere
Then the legs
I did tear

How could it be that an armless legless torso
Could be still alive and screaming
Without a jaw and breathing?

SO WITH THE JIGSAW I CUT HIS FUCKING HEAD OFF!

Finalised by decapitation
Finalised by decapitation
Finalised by decapitation
Finalised by decapitation

Now you have seen me disrespecting dead
Brutalising bodies and slicing of the head
I can look in your eyes and its me that you dread
The same look you gave me as I was cutting off you head

This is how I done it -- that made it sound lamer than fecal matter on a platter. (cool rhyme, eh?)

Well, I could only read part of it the first read. And I read it all the way through once just to get an idea because sometimes I'm like that and try to look at something from an unbiased perspective. I read it again just now and it actuallt seemed a little funny to me. It must be warped mentalities at work. I don't go for gorey anything that Bela, Boris, Lon, or Uncle Vinnie wasn't in and they didn't do gore like now. But your thoughts were pretty in line as crude as they were. I'd work on some of the flow issues.
It's nothing I would want actually, but some of the others might like it.

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