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Old 2005-09-24, 00:49
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Clan Rats

A mushroom cloud in the background
A web of venomous hate
A government mishapen
A medical mistake
This gutter-running trash
Has grown to infestation
A moral gap lets reason snap
Civil war across the nation

We don't sound
Like a silencer
Kill lady luck and bury her
Filth we eat, filth we are
Filth we bleed, Filth no more

The blades at hand
Are poisoned tipped
Our malice spawned of psyches ripped
The streets are quiet
Conscience too
We are filth and so are you

SIGN ON
To urban warfare craze
SIGN UP
The world's most unclean phase
MOVE IN
Be baptised in our slime
MOVE OUT
Like rats out of the grime

We don't sound
Like a silencer
Kill lady luck and bury her
Filth we eat, filth we are
Filth we bleed, Filth no more

Endless spiral downward
As our banners drip with waste
This underworld battalion
Uprising now with haste
We are the diseased
We are the deceased
The same as any other militia
But attractiveness decreased

Repulsive the war
Repulsive the soldier
So ignore the rust
And armour your shoulder
Ugly the skin
Ugly the race
Noone will kiss you
So cover your face
 
Old 2005-09-24, 02:22
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That was prefect. I have absolutely no complaints. One read I got the meter and the flow was quite good. I liked the way you used certain words to punch it once in awhile. Really cool piece. It had a Metallica feel to it to me. Something that you'd want the words very legible to.

I wish we didn't need soldiers, but they come in handy for more than just wars. I think the States are really finding that out for sure now. But as far as the song goes it was a-okay.
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Old 2005-09-24, 02:55
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i liked it
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