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2005-09-21, 21:35
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A nation spawned by illness
Judging everyone with scorn
I saw corruption coming
So I grabbed it by the horn
This spearhead revolution
Is a vile thing to lead
It sucks your cock and steals your soul
For everything you need
Overkill and instinct
Braver suicide
Upper class and broken glass
Watch it all subside
Born of subtle consequence
The forceful change begins
I rise above the masses
With a cloak composed of sins
The creatures that surround me
Will surrender easily
My will be done
And hallowed be my reign of tyranny
Overkill and instinct
Braver homicide
Lower class and toxic gas
Watch the two collide
Close the curtain on the past
Now is time for war
Praising things that don't exist
For fear of being bored
Demons wearing human skins
And feeding on the meek
I grow in strength while underlings
Starve themselves to feed the weak
TO FEED THE FUCKING WEAK
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2005-09-22, 02:17
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Well, I don't think I need to tell you about the line that doesn't appeal to me. The idea it gets across is okay, but I just don't like what you used as the metaphor for it. Personal opinion.
The rest of it had some good balanced imagery and had a good meter to it. Like sitting on a rocking horse. I think it could be poetry or easily adapted to a song.
Sorry I missed this. I don't even recall reading the title. I try to read everything here.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-09-25, 23:20
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The cock sucking metaphor is out of place. Cock sucking is usually implied as good. You're using it in a negative way.
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2005-09-25, 23:42
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slack as fuck
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Well, I don't think I need to tell you about the line that doesn't appeal to me.
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well at least he didnt say the C word 
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Fucking on the couch while posting on Metaltabs and getting caught by your mother....
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2005-09-26, 00:50
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you mean cuntcunt? or just plain old cunt?
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2005-09-26, 01:43
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Originally Posted by Tulvox
The cock sucking metaphor is out of place. Cock sucking is usually implied as good. You're using it in a negative way.
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I disagree. If you call a person a cock-sucker are you being flattering or demeaning? Here it's basically robbing the cock-suckee of everything it is or stands for. It's being deceptive and selfish while you think it's being so great. Typical male idea of thinking with the wrong head.
Don't be little cock-suckers you guys. That's not nice. And don't giggle!!
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-09-26, 07:15
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Life is pain.
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I wish it would suck my cock |
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2005-09-27, 04:14
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
I disagree. If you call a person a cock-sucker are you being flattering or demeaning? Here it's basically robbing the cock-suckee of everything it is or stands for. It's being deceptive and selfish while you think it's being so great. Typical male idea of thinking with the wrong head.
Don't be little cock-suckers you guys. That's not nice. And don't giggle!!
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But he wasn't calling anyone or anything a cock sucker. He just said "it sucks your cock"
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2005-09-27, 12:20
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Oh yes, he did and you just did. "it" is the anything that's doing the deed.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-09-27, 20:15
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slack as fuck
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Originally Posted by OpethFan
you mean cuntcunt? or just plain old cunt?
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dont say cunt, you cunt! L,B will rip your head off! cunt!
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2005-09-27, 23:26
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No, I won't. I'm desensitized to that by now so I just overlook it. Just don't call me that. I still don't like the word and won't say it, but if you guys want to be that way go for it.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-09-28, 00:22
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What I meant by it was the sort of "Cheap thrill in exchange for your soul" deal that Satan's always up to in the movies and shit. That sort of idea anyways. Oh well, it's fun to know I got people speculating over the phrase "It sucks your cock". I bet it would work for Shakespeare too...
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2005-09-28, 00:34
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Nah, he's dead. He wouldn't care anymore. 
But yeah, that's about what I was getting out of it.
See what you got started? I thought I was going to have to beat him up!!
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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