2005-08-31, 04:50
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TELL ME WAT U THINK OF THIS LYRICS
DESTROY REBUILD
Chaos disrupts dawn of your salvation
Breeding silence, thoughts of your demise
Destroy Rebuild
Age of Death
Torment fuels struggle and persistence
Order rises from a tarnished flag
BLOOD OF MAN
Struggling against ignorance
Rejecting deceptive morals
Fuelling this resistance
The urge to enslave another
Drug us into conflict
Violence is our weapon
We are never Sacred
We are never free
Forced to live in this hell hole, Forced to kneel in front of the whore
Rise of mutilation
Slaughter of the nations
Failing superstructure
Our conviction is eternal
Castrating the abusive
Dignify no oppressor
Pledging no allegiance
To the fallen master
Blood of mankind
Knows no bounds. Knows no Trust.
Enslaved by the gun.
'Til our death we serve no one
We serve no gods, we serve ourselves
Raining Terror on Rotten Bastards
Selling lives to painted corpses
Painted Corpses on the street
Born as Christians, Bred as fools
WAR TO END ALL WARS
Mandatory to the state
Rape and Kill, Sedate and maim
Dominance over the seat of power
Heed the call of mother war
Holocaust of fear births a child
From the cradle to the flanks
Forward march!
war to End All Wars
Arm yourselves with compliance
Never look back. We march on.
FORCE FED
To need this tool, to feed the lie
Is my desire to unlearn
I wage this war against my head
drawn from dreams unholy.
Force Fed ignorance
Force Fed decadence
Force Fed ignorance
force Fed bullshit
I force it all outside the vein
All it crated, all illusions
What may remain, acres of skin
Im awake, I am conscious.
Turn it off, elusive minutes
Elusive life escaping me
Turn it off canned demise
Of all thoughts beyond this realm.
THOSE WHO OPPOSE
Act of one is the death of all lawless and corrupt
Rising force to rule them all, stern and unforgiving
Failure of the government, source of such disdain
End the age of decadence, struggle to attain
Corpses of forgotten crimes fornicate and sow
Seeds of terror, seeds of shame, womb of vapid sores
Malignancy, Blasphemy, cancer left untreated
Act of war is justified, purifying fire
Resurrect God of War
Bow and Conform Bloodshed is at hand
Bow and Conform Oppose, be enslaved
Reign Absolute, salvation is enthroned
Reign Absolute, freedom be sustained.
No more restraint, we choose to see
No more restraint as we choose to see all the lies
Those who oppose will not survive, will not escape the purging
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2005-08-31, 05:21
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HES BAAACK
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i kind of glazed over
id recommend more story and less concept
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2005-08-31, 05:50
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Life is pain.
Banned
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Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Australia
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Pretty good, better than alot of stuff I read here I say.
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2005-08-31, 09:16
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Master Killer
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the short one's had nice running lines but 'blood of man' didn't really catch me.
not bad!
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2005-08-31, 12:57
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Post-whore
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Nice man.6/10
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2005-08-31, 21:44
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New Blood
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Pretty damn good.
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2005-08-31, 22:51
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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I thought from Force Fed to the end were the best. They all had pretty good flow to them though.
I'm not specifically meaning this piece, but all of them like it, too. It seems like there's so many things that are written with the same theme like this that a really catchy creative edge would be good to hook attention to it. Maybe take it a step away from what it's saying and add another dimension to it. Of course, that could be done with the music, too, and that would be the dimension. Sometimes print doesn't do a piece justice.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-09-04, 16:06
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Senior Metalhead
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Really good lyrics. A lot of the same concepts, but overall very good.
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2005-09-13, 19:08
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Post-whore
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Good shit. Fucking immense. If only there was an applause smilie...
And for the critics who liketh not concepts, transcendental things appear conceptual.
I'm guessing they didn't do Textual Analysis at school. Two lines of metaphor can reveal an aeon of story.
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2005-09-13, 19:43
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
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Dahling, I graduated in 1977. I haven't done much analysis lately, but I do know what I like and what I don't and that's what I say.
Have you read/ heard "Lamb Lies Down on Broadway" or "Seventh Sojourn?" Anything by Alan Parsons Project? Very good concepts from back in the day.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-09-22, 01:24
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New Blood
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Location: Canada eh
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Pretty well done, though I prefer imagination over reality. The kind of thing Transient said. Also, Force Fed is a title already in use by Strapping Young Lad (Just thought I'd say).
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2005-10-01, 23:11
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Attorney at Bird Law
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Quote:
Originally Posted by kraf
Pretty well done, though I prefer imagination over reality. The kind of thing Transient said. Also, Force Fed is a title already in use by Strapping Young Lad (Just thought I'd say).
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In the world of music, it is highly improbable you won't use a song title already in use unless you are so insecure that you feel the need to purposely create song titles that are way, way out there... I do suppose, actually, there's nothing wrong with that, either. Back to my original point, however- as long as you aren't directly or consciously ripping someone off, no foul, says I.
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2005-10-01, 23:20
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Senior Metalhead
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Quote:
Originally Posted by kraf
Pretty well done, though I prefer imagination over reality. The kind of thing Transient said. Also, Force Fed is a title already in use by Strapping Young Lad (Just thought I'd say).
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Force fed, if I remember, is also a song name of a God Forbid song. I used to really like that band.
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2005-10-03, 22:15
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New Blood
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2005-10-24, 00:34
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Senior Metalhead
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i thought it was a little cliche but not bad
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