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Old 2005-08-31, 04:50
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TELL ME WAT U THINK OF THIS LYRICS

DESTROY REBUILD

Chaos disrupts dawn of your salvation
Breeding silence, thoughts of your demise

Destroy Rebuild
Age of Death

Torment fuels struggle and persistence
Order rises from a tarnished flag





BLOOD OF MAN

Struggling against ignorance
Rejecting deceptive morals
Fuelling this resistance
The urge to enslave another

Drug us into conflict
Violence is our weapon
We are never Sacred
We are never free

Forced to live in this hell hole, Forced to kneel in front of the whore

Rise of mutilation
Slaughter of the nations
Failing superstructure
Our conviction is eternal


Castrating the abusive
Dignify no oppressor
Pledging no allegiance
To the fallen master

Blood of mankind
Knows no bounds. Knows no Trust.
Enslaved by the gun.
'Til our death we serve no one
We serve no gods, we serve ourselves

Raining Terror on Rotten Bastards
Selling lives to painted corpses
Painted Corpses on the street
Born as Christians, Bred as fools







WAR TO END ALL WARS

Mandatory to the state
Rape and Kill, Sedate and maim

Dominance over the seat of power
Heed the call of mother war
Holocaust of fear births a child
From the cradle to the flanks

Forward march!
war to End All Wars

Arm yourselves with compliance
Never look back. We march on.

FORCE FED

To need this tool, to feed the lie
Is my desire to unlearn
I wage this war against my head
drawn from dreams unholy.

Force Fed ignorance
Force Fed decadence
Force Fed ignorance
force Fed bullshit

I force it all outside the vein
All it crated, all illusions
What may remain, acres of skin
Im awake, I am conscious.

Turn it off, elusive minutes
Elusive life escaping me
Turn it off canned demise
Of all thoughts beyond this realm.











THOSE WHO OPPOSE

Act of one is the death of all lawless and corrupt
Rising force to rule them all, stern and unforgiving
Failure of the government, source of such disdain
End the age of decadence, struggle to attain

Corpses of forgotten crimes fornicate and sow
Seeds of terror, seeds of shame, womb of vapid sores
Malignancy, Blasphemy, cancer left untreated
Act of war is justified, purifying fire

Resurrect God of War

Bow and Conform Bloodshed is at hand
Bow and Conform Oppose, be enslaved
Reign Absolute, salvation is enthroned
Reign Absolute, freedom be sustained.

No more restraint, we choose to see
No more restraint as we choose to see all the lies

Those who oppose will not survive, will not escape the purging
 
Old 2005-08-31, 05:21
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i kind of glazed over


id recommend more story and less concept
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Old 2005-08-31, 05:50
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Pretty good, better than alot of stuff I read here I say.
 
Old 2005-08-31, 09:16
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the short one's had nice running lines but 'blood of man' didn't really catch me.

not bad!
 
Old 2005-08-31, 12:57
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Nice man.6/10
 
Old 2005-08-31, 21:44
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Pretty damn good.
 
Old 2005-08-31, 22:51
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I thought from Force Fed to the end were the best. They all had pretty good flow to them though.

I'm not specifically meaning this piece, but all of them like it, too. It seems like there's so many things that are written with the same theme like this that a really catchy creative edge would be good to hook attention to it. Maybe take it a step away from what it's saying and add another dimension to it. Of course, that could be done with the music, too, and that would be the dimension. Sometimes print doesn't do a piece justice.
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Old 2005-09-04, 16:06
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Really good lyrics. A lot of the same concepts, but overall very good.
 
Old 2005-09-13, 19:08
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Good shit. Fucking immense. If only there was an applause smilie...
And for the critics who liketh not concepts, transcendental things appear conceptual.
I'm guessing they didn't do Textual Analysis at school. Two lines of metaphor can reveal an aeon of story.
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Old 2005-09-13, 19:43
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Dahling, I graduated in 1977. I haven't done much analysis lately, but I do know what I like and what I don't and that's what I say.
Have you read/ heard "Lamb Lies Down on Broadway" or "Seventh Sojourn?" Anything by Alan Parsons Project? Very good concepts from back in the day.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2005-09-22, 01:24
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Pretty well done, though I prefer imagination over reality. The kind of thing Transient said. Also, Force Fed is a title already in use by Strapping Young Lad (Just thought I'd say).
 
Old 2005-10-01, 23:11
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Pretty well done, though I prefer imagination over reality. The kind of thing Transient said. Also, Force Fed is a title already in use by Strapping Young Lad (Just thought I'd say).


In the world of music, it is highly improbable you won't use a song title already in use unless you are so insecure that you feel the need to purposely create song titles that are way, way out there... I do suppose, actually, there's nothing wrong with that, either. Back to my original point, however- as long as you aren't directly or consciously ripping someone off, no foul, says I.
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Old 2005-10-01, 23:20
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Quote:
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Pretty well done, though I prefer imagination over reality. The kind of thing Transient said. Also, Force Fed is a title already in use by Strapping Young Lad (Just thought I'd say).


Force fed, if I remember, is also a song name of a God Forbid song. I used to really like that band.
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Old 2005-10-03, 22:15
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Nice lyrics mate...i thought they were pretty good.Keep it up
 
Old 2005-10-24, 00:34
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i thought it was a little cliche but not bad
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