BASED ON A TRUE STORY

While noone was looking in the light of day
Two youths stole a truck and drove through the fence
Bull horns roared and minds blown away
Were these kids brave or just fucking dense?

DESPERADOS! DESPERADOS!
YOU MY HEROES! YOU ARE MY HEROES!
IN STOLEN VEHICLES! IN STOLEN VEHICLES!
YOU TOOK YOUR FREEDOM AND RAN FOR THE HILLS!

The detention centre was left askew,
They were chased by pigs for hours more,
There was no light left but they held on to
The tiny key for freedoms door

DESPERADOS! DESPERADOS!
YOU MY HEROES! YOU ARE MY HEROES!
IN STOLEN VEHICLES! IN STOLEN VEHICLES!
YOU TOOK YOUR FREEDOM AND RAN FOR THE HILLS!

When theres nothing left,
Theres nothing to lose,
Subject of theft,
Of your right to choose,
They disobeyed,
And didn't give up,
Keep on fighting,
Til the ghost gives up!

DESPERADOS! DESPERADOS!

heh heh Of course I have to look at the factual standpoint. Evading arrest, grand theft auto, destruction of property. If they took a county/state vehicle that's a government property charge. If they ran from the facility they were there for a reason so it's all tacked onto previous charge.

Brave or dense? I'd go with dense. In fact, beyond dense unless it's a safe haven for them and they want to stay locked up. You'd not believe how many around here are like that because their homelife sucks that bad. Some people just don't think before doing.

But anyways, your flow and stuff is good. It seems pretty "teen" sounding because of the content. It's technically alright, but I'm not digging the content itself. That's just my opinion though.

There was an old movie called Desparado that I liked ---not the one with Antonio Banderas in it, but another one. And the Eagles' song.

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Haha it's good for some cheesy power metal stuff.

for some reason that was the in my mind when i was looking at this song

the capitals made it funny

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I envisioned more of a grind/punk/crust whatever genre with the lyrics myself.

Well, you're the creator so it's natural for you to have a certain idea. i wouldnt' be upset about hearing different ideas for a lyric. I've heard about 4 different versions of "Whiskey in the Jar" not including the parodies my friend has done lyrically with the song.

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