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Old 2005-07-22, 16:23
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Scars of propaganda

Consumer, where’s your retail rights now?
The media plagues you with your lies
Cover up your eyes
While you burn away
You mean so little anyway
I hope your feeling so anaesthetised
Capitalism chokes you as you sleep

Deny yourself
You bought your own chains
So go verify your money
Consumerism bleeds you from your wrists
Tell us what you missed

Our human rights leaves us with little more
Than the scars of propaganda
Maybe you were better off in your coma.
Either way the skin never heals, forever tainted with the blood
Of your white skin Semitism
Scars read white noise upon our own disease.
You became your own killer.

hehehe these were the lyrics to a song when i was 15 (19 now) and thinking being left wing was ever so cool.........
might be stupid topic to talk about but i feel it is coherent enough to be thread worthy
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Old 2005-07-22, 23:08
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I'm thinking that if places were repeated so it went a, b, c, b, a it might round it off. It keeps the end from just being the end abruptly. It's not too bad, but like you said it's from a age time frame when standing on the soapbox declaring the rights and wrongs of the world is popular. Been there, done that.
So did you ever put music to it or anything?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
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Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
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Old 2005-07-23, 12:29
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yeah it was very dillinger-esque the first bit was seen as a chorus but being so young it was like a max of 5 chords

i am playing the last gig with my band today it will be emotional
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