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2005-07-18, 00:48
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horrendous poetry..
I was bored on the blog that I share with my shamelessly emo boyfriend (and I haven't seen him for three weeks because he's in germany and I'm in savannah GA) and I whipped up this little dollop of a poem. god it sucks.
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Godammit! Fuck!
I miss you alot!
I'm all out of Luck!
Even over the phone,
You know just how to pluck
My heartstrings
and stuff!
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the end. feel free to upchuck.
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2005-07-18, 01:54
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slack as fuck
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interesting
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2005-07-18, 02:47
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thanks...I guess.
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2005-07-18, 18:19
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slack as fuck
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i thought it was cool the way you worded it
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2005-07-19, 00:17
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Well, it wasn't my most favorite piece I've ever read or even my second favorite. It sounds more like a greeting card you might find in a Spencer's Gifts. It would be cute if you got a neat little "emo" card and handwrote this in it and sent it to him. The first line was what turned me off from the start, but to each his own. It's the thought that counts.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-07-19, 01:14
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honestly this is the kind of thing thats best left in the notebook by your bed
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2005-07-19, 05:30
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I know it sucks major balls. I wrote it cuz I was like hmm I wonder if I can write anything when totally not feeling anything. so this crap came out on my scren like a nosebleed or something. I kinda laughed when I read it and decided to see what others thought.
glad that ya'll felt the same!
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2005-07-20, 07:20
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honestly this is the kind of thing thats best left in the notebook by your bed
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Haha. I can imagine whats in the notebook by your bed Sam.
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2005-07-20, 13:00
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concert memories from the day after all my concert, a hand drawn DEATH logo, and a few entries to remember something fun that happened. i never read it anyways, its na 80 page spiral bound notebook and im about 30 pages in ... and is tarted it at lesat 2 or maybe 3 years ago
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2005-07-20, 13:35
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Stuff like that is fun to read months and years later. I've got quite a few things like that. 
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-07-20, 13:57
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actually, i hate reading that stuff. my past self always embarasses me!
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2005-07-20, 16:37
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I agree that some is, but some is just wonderful memories.
Especially the "wake me up and we'll go fishing when you get up, and me and my g/f made chocolate chips cookies if you want some" written on a paper plate that was hanging on my bedroom door afew years ago.
Along with the events calender they make.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-07-20, 23:28
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i read my goth diary (those silly freshman year phases and self-applied labels) well now I thought I was a goth at the time and now whenever I go back and read it I laugh my ass off at how depressed I tried to sound...good times.
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