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Old 2005-07-09, 17:01
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"Autumn Nights"

Just a poem I wrote. It might be a nice spoken intro to another piece. (I've still got Moody Blues fever after the concert.) Ooo, I'm getting concept vibes from it now. Hmmm

"Autumn Night"

Asters bloom like a cape waving 'cross the field
Thin smoulder tapering from the fire
Sunset streaks peek through jewelled leaves
The canopy trying to hide the stars

The moon shows it's face, a slivered smile
As the glow of Mars draws near
Mysterious and yet so visible
Up in a sky so clear

The scent of autumn, damp and pungent
The leaves, a carpet of muted hue
To cushion our footsteps as we walk
Days 'til winter becoming few

Clearly the night was made to be
A prime example of beautious delight
Scent of grapes permeats the air
How I love an autumn night

My eldest son's bipolar website:

-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
Old 2005-07-10, 19:12
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Nice visual piece, not too sure about line 5 (with the Mars bit), am feeling a single violin (with backing keyboards) entering after this has been spoken

Great work!

The Freedom of Chaos
The Secret of The Secret
The Truth of The Truth

Originally Posted by Undone
moonraven?....more like ass raven

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