In this hour of dispair, clinging at the straws of hope,
Little did I care, I'd soon be killing the creator.
My wake was not in sight, my eulogy was being read,
But never did I die, haunting with my muddled head.

Some Angels died!
Some Angels cried!
Some Angels fought!
Some Angels ran but all were mine!

Nothing matters now, and all is lost within three days!
Never would have thought that my life would end in three quarter score years...
Abandoned hope and without the plan I lost all light...
Distinguished nightmare that my control lost would become true...
With blades in hand I dared cause the abacus!
Would it turn red, now she's dead, her head knowing nothing of deceit.

Some Angels died!
Some Angels cried!
Some Angels fought!
Some Angels ran but all were mine!

Some Angels died!
Some Angels cried!
Some Angels fought!
Some Angels ran but all were mine!

For a lifetime of agony came the fatal attack,
Should have seen it from the past coming back.
Sorting through the mess of the pages of convictions,
My fortold death came like a surprise.

And as the world turns red with the blood of the face of deceit,
See noone cares but the badges of authority,
Never one to boast of my accomplishments,
But I would 'have' everything at my lips and at my hands.

The carnal forge would have me torn apart by fate?
It does not exist, by rights you think I'm fooled,
I never lost the war, only the battles.
With my angels nowhere on the battlefield this is my war.

Some Angels died!
All Angels cried.

There must be something in the air lately because I've read some cool stuff around. The imagery in this was very edgy to the point of wondering where it came from. I wasn't sure about the line with "abacus" in it simply because the only place I've really encountered one was kindergarden. Why was that chosen for that line? I'm just curious.
There was a lot of empowering ideas in it and a lot of mournful ones, too. I thought they were well placed. The chorus was really a good touch the way you did it.
Another nicely done piece.

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Abacus, you shidt the beads to make different values, In other words turn the tables

Okay, I gotcha. Thanks.

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Very good piece.

I would've put a little more empahsis on the three days though. Sort of like a countdown to your breaking point.

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Well, after that line he could have someone do a growled 1, 2, 3 in the back ground at the beginning of certain parts of the other verses. Just one at a time, but to emphasize that if he wanted to. He could even change the title to 3 Days if he wanted.

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