this is pretty much what i wrote a long time ago and posed here entitled "god?". it was terrible.. it had pointless stupid god bashing.. but i took the lines i liked and i wrote this.

Blood trickles as nails drive thru your eyes
I lick my lips and then spit out your flesh
Excited, my heart beats louder then your screaming.
You no longer look human.
I loathe you, yet you amaze me.
You're wife and daughter are asleed two blocks down.
As you take your last gasping breaths, I peirce your arm thru your heart.
I put a crate outside your house with a letter attatched.
From Daddy.
It's beginning to drip

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I can dig it

Bia- You can dig anything

As I was reading that, I couldn't pick out any emotion whatsoever. Also try get some excitement and energy into it. It came off as a narrative.

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@newhellonearth:not bad.first try i guess

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ew









not quite my cup o' mud, but it's got some grossness to it for as short as it is. You're one sick, twisted m.f-er, aren't ya??? lol j/k

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