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Old 2005-06-14, 10:23
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Cut-up method

http://www.ubu.com/papers/burroughs_gysin.html

I recently found about this method
(after listening to some David Bowie songs
and checking the lyrics)and I think it's quite interesting.

Of course it would be hard to create something
with meaning but if you can manage to do it
the result could be very original and good.

What do you think about it?
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Old 2005-06-14, 17:20
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That's interesting. The closest thing I can think of like it is the magnetic words and phrases you can rearrange on the fridge to make up different things. This is a new twist. Thanks for sharing it.
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Old 2005-06-14, 22:37
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Except from the use of this
method in painting(collage) and
literature(W.Burroughs),
I think it can be seen in some movies
like 21grams(the only thing I liked about the
movie was that it wasn't linear ) and
Mullholand Drive(by David Lynch)

here's something I made with some stolen fancy
words,this thing and an IQ of 200(below zero but still it's
a big number)

Gray whispers nothing terribly,
agnostic language
undisciplined,broken.No smile defers much,confusion...
Deliberately reconstructed coma,
sleeplessly sighs.
The black cloud of sanity
driven away with laughter.
Organic whispers,die politely.
It's undesirable,broken terribly,
undisciplined coma
dies.No confusion
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Old 2005-06-14, 23:08
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Quote:
Originally Posted by HELLBLASTER-666

What do you think about it?

All due respect but it seems like some people have WAY too much time on their hands. (the originators of this...not you)

My view..
Write something or don't, gitchy shortcuts arent meant for everything.
 
Old 2005-06-15, 01:52
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The metal chick has a point...Form writing seems very bland.
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Old 2005-06-17, 20:44
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You're kinda right.You can't create something
complete with this but you can get some
interesting phrases and continue from there
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Old 2005-06-17, 21:07
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Yeah, I read the article. If nothing else, it could be used to start something. We all know starting is the hard part.
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