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2005-06-12, 11:45
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
Posts: 8,881
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Did you just graduate? lol Actually I liked this. Mainly because the beginning was a good graduation of built up feelings to a boiling point and the feelings that could very well follow. It was sparse enough where one can fill in their own storyline pertaining to themself.
Would you ever think to hook this up with music? I actually think with the right kind it could be done. Or use it as a type of lead or backing for a more descriptive story-lined lyric.
Good one.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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