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2005-06-07, 22:41

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the Skeletal being

Beware of this story made flesh
For it is a scar by evil creation
Torn from its holder of madness
Within the caves of body and soul

Hateful man, a killer created to taste
To feast upon the sky sweet with sun
I am the skeletal being, with such clarity
With a passion to maim, slash and scar

I spawn upon those who fear my evil
To shower blood across a lake of moor
Words are weak against my weapon
-called human being

damn....I've been listening to too much Death.....

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Last edited by powersofterror : 2005-06-07 at 22:44.

2005-06-07, 23:37

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You can't listen to too much Death. I can't listen to any until Bob comes home again. lol But I do read lyrics for the songs at times and some are very good.

I liked this piece more than a few of the later ones you've done. It seemed to have the Poe-ish undertones in it even with the mildly phrased gore parts. I think that makes it better, too. There's just enough balance of elements in it.
Nice job. Is your band doing it?

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