Verse 1
I have commited a sin worthy of death
Tonight I failed to see the beauty in you
Your glow went out, and just like that
I'm haunting you with my everpresent smile.

Chorus
I loved you like I loved no other,
this curse,this ambivalent blessing,
and now I haunt you,
I am the ghost of love,
the ghost of your devotion.

Verse 2
I am your gentle plague, a voice of desolation,
a noxious breath of all you ever loved,
glass splinters in your eyes, your silent suffocation,
and soon, you'll disapear into the void.

Chorus

Break
Beautiful, beautiful toy
Created for me to destroy
and soon, you'll disapear into the void.

Chorus


Haha wrote this because I'm happy single and my ex who dumped me is miserable There is some weird satisfaction in being terrible...

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This was really cool. I wasn't sure about the word void, but it works alright on second read.

I've been in that situation before and it does feel a bit empowering for awhile. That was an old b/f of mine.

Here's to moving on to better times!

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It's probably just me but I find every one of your songs scream Evanescence. I just cannot get into your pieces

Infinity - Heh, well, I do intend to use them for a goth metal band, not a grindcore band Eventhough the themes might be similar at times, Amy Lee is whiney and always sings about losing, and I trow in vampires and seprents when I feel like it. Good sir for your reference http://www.azlyrics.com/e/evanescence.html k? Remember, I'm a chick and shit, so I'm allowed to write tripe about feelings and crap.

L,B'XXX - Yeah, the void thing kinda got me too, but I'm meaning that any bad memory I have of his will disapear and he won't be affecting me in any way.

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I liked it for the goth metal style, but I would drop "into the viod" all together. Just let destroy ring out or whatever.

That and I didn't like the sound of the destroy - toy rhyme. perfect rhymes sound contrived to me.

But i'm no lyricist so take it with a grain of salt.

Hmm, these do feel half baked, gotta edit them don't I?

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nice shit. better than anything I could do...