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2005-05-15, 20:46
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Denimwearinghillbilly
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Fuck, i feel like shit, sorry guys.
It sticks in my unconsciousness
Confused, seduced, mentally abused.
Don’t you feel regret, don’t you feel self-respect?
The latter pounded to dust.
You’ve been around the block,
I knew before I jumped in.
My feelings start to rock,
Thinking about your sins.
Conjoined thoughts differ,
Giving me a puzzle,
Not to be solved.
But to be used.
Hatred, anger, furious shame,
I’m not God.
You did it,
You are to blame.
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2005-05-16, 02:03
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e-hugz for The Doctor. Sounds like a rough time. Good to write it out when you feel that way. Not a bad piece either. Not really detailed in the description so you can kind of take it how you want. Could be about a friend and it could be about a romantic interest.
Hope things get better. 
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-05-16, 09:16
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Denimwearinghillbilly
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2005-05-16, 09:37
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Master Killer
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sounds like your pissed off too, anyways, its pretty good but really, really negative in the 'feeling' department, to me it seems like you'de want to punch someone out for something that happend. (maybe thats just me though)
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2005-05-16, 10:58
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Denimwearinghillbilly
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youre right about the feeling department, but it's not agression, just anger
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2005-05-16, 11:14
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Oh yes, definitely anger, but deception as well as self-deception maybe out of false hope, and inability to understand the whys of the other. It packed a lot as short as it was. May I ask if it was written while in the midst of the feeling? One of those pieces that writes itself in one fell swoop?
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-05-16, 20:20
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Denimwearinghillbilly
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yeah, i was feeling pretty lousy thinking about what happened, and i was playing a Jimi Hendrix record very loud, haha, that defenetly gave it a boost.
for the record: things are solved already, so i'm back on track.
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2005-05-16, 21:14
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Attorney at Bird Law
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Girl problems, Doc?
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2005-05-16, 22:51
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I just read something the other day that makes a whole lot of sense.
" Romance and poetry, ivy, lichens, and wallflowers, need ruin to make them grow. " LEAMINGTON, December 15, 1859.
Glad things are looking up.
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-05-17, 09:51
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Denimwearinghillbilly
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Girl problems, Doc?
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yeah, but i'm net gonna tell y'all about it, figure the poem, haha |
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