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2005-05-07, 11:48
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"Food of the Demons"
Okay, I got one for ya. Hope you enjoy this. The gore read here this morning was my inspiration, but I've added the ole L,B' touch. Things aren't always as they seem. This took about 15 minutes to write. Thanks for reading.
" Food of the Demons "
Sirens, their temptation sings
Scent enraptures sense
Grasps the heart with demon fingers
Willpower gone without repent
Crimson fire blazes my tongue
Swallowed before the razors shear
Tearing through my internal system
Eyes of terror, brow shows fear
Forks of agony spear me inside
Rolling in exquisite pain
Clutching trying to soothe the demons
Sweating, seething, going insane
Purge the bowels of the scent of demons
Fouled, their putrid fetish ends
Last existing thought of fire
Let emancipation begin
BJH
5/7/2005
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-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
Last edited by L,B'XXX : 2005-05-10 at 01:02.
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2005-05-07, 12:15
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FUCKING HOFF-STYLE!!!!!!!
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I can see the L,B' touch, and its good!
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When faced with a difficult situation, Jesus asks himself, "What would Chuck Norris do?"
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2005-05-07, 15:15
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I am a tax on the world..
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Man, I get real sweaty after I wack my dong. Yeah, cause I headbang while I do, and I can't really "Jump" (haha ) like VanHalen in a dorm room, so I just walk back and forth....haha a couple days ago I was jumping up and down on my bed, with my pants down and my roommate came in when I wasn't looking, hahaha.
 
This is my band's page
http://www.myspace.com/ferocitydentontx
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2005-05-09, 00:31
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Ever eat something too spicy and regretted it later?
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-05-09, 00:54
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Eh, I do not like your word choice, ma'. It just does not flow for me.
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2005-05-10, 01:11
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It doesnt flow for you? Okay.
I did some editting in the second verse that was pointed out to me. I think it sounds better now.
I won't eat something that's going to burn my guts out, but I've been around those who have and this is dedicated to them.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-05-10, 16:38
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Nice work L'BXX, as usual!
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