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Old 2005-05-07, 03:24
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Angry fucked up gore

i feel like making a gore lyric right now, so i will

use the dagger
to hack the bodies of the infants all to shit
burn
burn your eyes out with the fires of hells disease

Bathe in the blood of the whore i call a mother
and then saw limbs off of my dog and microwave his body until it explodes

ZOMBIE ANAL PENITRATION
RAPING CHILDREN
MASTURBATION

Vomit in your underware
shit and blood is everywhere
rise the devil
bring dispare
AND SLAUGHTER ALL IN THE PATH OF EVIL

GENOCIDE
GENOCIDE
GENOCIDE

DIE!!!!!
 
Old 2005-05-07, 03:27
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Sounds like something from Devourment - 138
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Old 2005-05-07, 05:44
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Lol, entertaining stuff.

I could write gore lyrics so disgusting that you'd all be scared of me
 
Old 2005-05-07, 08:59
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Old 2005-05-07, 11:30
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Lol, entertaining stuff.

I could write gore lyrics so disgusting that you'd all be scared of me


PROVE IT, BUDDY!!!!!!! I'm calling you on this one.

Eh, this piece sounded too 14 year old to me. From "Shit and blood" on it wasn't bad. The beginning made me shake my head and roll my eyes.

You're imagery will get better though. I gotta hand it to you for trying.
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Old 2005-05-07, 15:13
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Old 2005-05-07, 20:16
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this is lame as hell.. i have no sympathy.
its just a bunch of gorey ideas put together.
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Old 2005-05-07, 20:36
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this is lame as hell.. i have no sympathy.
its just a bunch of gorey ideas put together.

Isn't all gore that way
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Old 2005-05-08, 00:14
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Isn't all gore that way

everything he wrote, seemed completely random. no focus, no flow. pure rubbish.


btw.. the name "angry hobbit" brings to mind that migget guy from Abruptum.
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Old 2005-05-08, 08:30
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Beh, this isn't even fun, you gotta have a set story and flow instead of random stuff, and this isn't very graphic and gory, you just trying too hard and nt having an inspiration. Just have a look at some gore pics and erad some Cannibal Corpse lyrics to see good gore.
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Old 2005-05-08, 09:22
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Lol, entertaining stuff.

I could write gore lyrics so disgusting that you'd all be scared of me

Would.love.to.read.it
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Old 2005-07-22, 21:58
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hahahaha! i knew this would piss people off! i wasnt seriously trying to write lyrics, i just started typing every word that came into my head without thinking, and in the end i found the results pretty funny! i just like too goof around, lighten up a little guys!
 
Old 2005-07-22, 22:18
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nothing like a bump from months ago
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Old 2005-07-22, 23:11
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He spelled underwear wrong, too.

You're just as bad Tranny, I mean, Ralphie.
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Old 2005-07-22, 23:25
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Old 2005-07-23, 12:32
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i am just trying to figure out how to vomit in my underwear in the most gore like way. Do you take them off or just open them up and let rip?
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Old 2005-07-24, 00:27
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i am just trying to figure out how to vomit in my underwear in the most gore like way. Do you take them off or just open them up and let rip?


haha, i like the second one better!
 
Old 2005-07-24, 18:52
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i am just trying to figure out how to vomit in my underwear in the most gore like way. Do you take them off or just open them up and let rip?


Well, during bootcamp if you were gonna barf in the tear gas chamber they said to barf in your shirt or else you'd have to clean it up before you left that room. It sounds much more spontaneous that taking them off. Squishy, too.
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Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
 
Old 2005-07-24, 18:56
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
 
Old 2005-07-24, 19:36
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this is lame as hell.. i have no sympathy.
its just a bunch of gorey ideas put together.


+1
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Old 2005-07-25, 02:47
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now someone say +2.
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Old 2005-07-25, 21:28
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umm... +2?

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