sometimes, when i'm really bored, i sit in front of my computer and i try to do music.

i like to think i have the basic knowledge to create a song without making it sound like shit.

so, anyways, this is a song called Doomination (this title got an A+ on cheesiness) which is... well, a Doom metal wannabe.

http://rapidshare.de/files/1405492/Doomination.mp3.html

what i want is some advice regarding song structure, tempo, etc. if you can give my any, go ahead.