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Every Drop of Blood

2005-04-17, 05:08

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Every Drop of Blood

A black horizon greets each dawn
The future's lights have been dimmed
Every drop of blood is spilled
With intentions to purge those who've sinned

Everything surrounding me
Has fallen into ruin
Ashes from a broken glass
Show a light of truth
Everything inside of me
Is withered and decayed
Every drop of blood is mine
Every drop of blood is paid

Bring your aramgeddon
I will welcome it with glee
From black dawns sin
The advent of disease
The future's gone, horizon's gone
What hope have we now?

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2005-04-17, 11:55

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Those last 2 lines were really good. I liked this piece. I thought it had a good flow of thoughts. I'm thinking it would sound good as a prog rock piece with emphasis on that last verse maybe echoing the last lines to a rapid speed without music to add a little head music attitude to it. Cool one.

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2005-04-17, 12:04

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yep, this was a good one. i liked the opening verse

2005-04-17, 20:08

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Haha. It's actually meant to be an in your face thrash song.

Thanks for the comments.

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2005-04-19, 04:07

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I enjoyed that very much.
Thanks for sharing.

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