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Old 2002-06-16, 05:59
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please listen to my song

i www.guitar.com/artists/threshold
i didnt know where else to post this but i was interested to know what you guys thought of this song i wrote. it may take a minute or 2 but i would really appreciate some feedback on this one
 
Old 2002-06-16, 06:34
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so which one are u in the pic????
 
Old 2002-06-16, 06:42
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the tall one with the slayer shirt second from left
 
Old 2002-06-16, 06:47
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Are you guys old enough to buy porno mags lol no just joking your sound is pretty cool i like it. and the song with the solo man you guys rock. keep up the good work.
 
Old 2002-06-16, 07:28
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It's really good. I like just about everything. The only thing I think you need to work on is the vocal harmonizing. Great style by the way!
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Old 2002-06-16, 16:27
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this song rules!!
the riff are cool and i like the vocals too
keep on "rocking"
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Old 2002-06-16, 18:41
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Goddamn, great song!!!
And a nice production.
 
Old 2002-06-16, 18:53
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Nice solo. I like how the bass can actually be heard!
 
Old 2002-06-16, 22:10
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Are you guys old enough to buy porno mags


Haha, that's priceless!

The song ain't bad......i think the drumming could be better, and the vocals thing too.

Another thing, i think you need some tempo changes.....almost 5 minutes of the same drum beat is kind of boring. I like songs that change tempo...not constantly, but maybe 1-2 tempo change in a whole song.....it gives a new feel to the song and it doesn't seem like the song is dragging on for a lot longer than it should.
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Old 2002-06-16, 23:08
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good stuff. not exactly the kind of stuff im into but it's good. i also like how the bass can be heard.
 
Old 2002-06-16, 23:52
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hey thanx guys, i appreciate the honest opinions. in australia u have to be 18 to buy porno mags so um....i guess we arent old enough. hehe
 
Old 2002-06-17, 04:36
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lol hey man who cares with your music theres gonna be some hot metal chicks wanting you youngsters lol keep on rocking man you guy skick ass besides what are your ages?
 
Old 2002-06-17, 04:58
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well im the youngest im 15 and the other dudes r all 15 or 16,
 
Old 2002-06-17, 05:10
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well im the youngest im 15 and the other dudes r all 15 or 16,


Thats cool, keep it up.
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Old 2002-06-18, 19:01
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Nice heavy riff, i like the way you mix your music with pantera and slayer

ull go far
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Old 2003-01-02, 14:36
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Yeah not bad dude, the drums are kinda boring though, I know from experience it's hard to find a good drummer for a band. Some good harmonies on the guitar near the end. I think it could use one more riff at a double time or something, some really wicked fast chugging riff. The lead wasn't bad, and that was cool to hear the bass.
 
Old 2003-01-02, 18:29
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not too bad dude, needs a little work on the vocals though.
 
Old 2003-01-03, 01:47
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ok, so i guess i break up the whole "this song rocks" campaign going on, but its honestly not all that good to me, maybe im just weird. But to me it seems like something to be played while godzilla is walking through japan killing people and crushing buildings. The lead is good yeah, but if you really were to mix slayer and pantera, 2 huge thrash bands, you'd be playing your chorus, intro, verse, and all that waaayyyy faster. Its ok besides that though.
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Old 2003-01-03, 03:55
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you'd be playing your chorus, intro, verse, and all that waaayyyy faster. Its ok besides that though.

well not all the time it has to be fast sometimes u just gotta take it
slow
nice riff get a new drummer and your set
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Old 2003-01-03, 05:22
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well not all the time it has to be fast sometimes u just gotta take it


well, yeah, for breakdowns they go slow and shit, for the heavyness. But, in a thrash band, you never go throuhg a whole song slowly like that, unless its a ballad of some sort. and even then it speeds up. but i do agree, either get your drummer to pla something better (since it is so hard to find drummers these days), or just search for a new drummer.
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Old 2003-01-03, 21:05
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song sounds cool man but yeh i agree wiht the others the drums need to change a bit but otherwise dude its cool
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Old 2003-01-03, 23:49
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i have a question? How does ur band have 2 lead guitarists
 
Old 2003-01-04, 17:10
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THE SONG WAS PRETTY GOOD. I AGREE THE DRUMMING COULD USE SOME HELP BUT EVERYTHING ELSE IS GOOD. I ACTUALLY LKED THE VOCALS TOO. BUT LIKE THAT ONE GUY SAID BEFORE, IT WOULD BE A HELL OF A LOT BETTER IF IT WAS FASTER AND MAYBE HAD SOME HARMONICS ONCE IN A WHILE. KEEP METAL ALIVE -|-\m/-|-
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Old 2003-01-04, 20:08
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Soudnswe like a logiot of fuzzxy to me,
 
Old 2003-01-05, 16:53
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Like what?!
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Old 2003-01-05, 17:24
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it´s definatly definatly not my music but, it´s not bad.....
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Old 2003-01-13, 22:59
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BADASS MUTHA FUCKIN BAND!!!!!!
If you get signed make sure I know about it!!!!
The Harmonizing part is great (It doesn't have to be perfect, its a metal song)
its not a stupid punk song, whoever said they need help with harmonizing is nuts!!!
Lol don't take it personell but seems like it!!!
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Old 2003-01-14, 03:36
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How did you guys record this stuff?
Did you record this stuff in ur Garage?
Did you use an 8 track recorder?
How did you record this?
PLease I need to know so I can start posting my Mp3's?
what are the procedures and steps on how to record this stuff?
Thanks in advance!!!!
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Old 2003-01-15, 16:54
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well, i know you can record directly onto your computer. just go to your local radio shack and get a quarter inch to eigth inch coverter jack and plug in directly to your mic. input on you computer. then just use the standard windows sound recorder. you can overlay tracks and shit. the only thing you might have a problem with is the drums. you would probably just have to record them though a mic.
 
Old 2003-03-01, 22:57
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i liked the solo. the vocals could use more work, and so did the drums. no double bass drums i guess?
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Old 2003-03-02, 06:50
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that songs fuken awesome cant wait to hear u's live next week
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Old 2003-03-02, 06:51
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next song u do u should play the solo so i can hear whos the better soloer out of the two
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Old 2003-03-02, 16:49
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it's reeally cool, but i can;t cpmpare it to pantera or slayer to beb honedts(drink again)
 
Old 2003-03-02, 17:20
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I can't open link to the song, but I would think it would be alright.
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Old 2003-03-02, 19:59
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wow you guys REALLY suck! Just jokin..sounds good, especially for your ages. Keep it up...just think how far you'll be in 10 years
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Old 2003-03-04, 09:36
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everyone underestimates these guys, the two guitarists go off there head, unreal , when they bring out another G3 concert i want be suprised if one of these guys are on the stage playin, keep rockin dudes
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