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2005-04-10, 09:58
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Location: Brisbane, Australia.
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Price Of A Kiss
Heart Of Pure Onyx
Eyes Of Most Brilliant Green
He slithered into my doors
and uttered sweetly -
May.. may I kiss you?
Just for one last time...
(Chorus)
When The moonlight shone down
the beautiful lady was dancing
her grace, vicious grace
and ruby blood on her lips
When The moonlight shone down
I.. I was romancing
The blunt razorblade he left on my bed.
Two tiny teeth marks,
Rivers of blood on the floor,
Your life no longer priceless,
This is the cost of a kiss.
I swallowed your poison,
and you paid back with blood.
(chorus)
(bridge)
You are betrayer.
Greedy souleater.
You are consumer.
Thisty deceiver.
Your life is no longer priceless,
This is the price of a kiss.
(chorus)
Your life is no longer priceless,
This is the price of a kiss.
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I <3 12 year olds.
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2005-04-10, 14:14
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Location: Home is where the <3 is
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Wicked! I loved that! Great flow to it and the wording was romantic and almost a gothic flavor to it. And I don't mean goth in a lame way. Good stuff!
The title caught my eye, too, btw. That's a posi. 
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-04-10, 18:21
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Legio Draconorum Orkian
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Location: upon raging waves
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brilliant. i love you.
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2005-04-10, 21:01
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Would ya like me to leave the room so you 2 can be alone? (heehee  ) I couldn't resist.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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2005-04-11, 02:11
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Minnesota
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Kinda reminded me of Trent Reznor...
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Worker bees can leave,
Even drones can fly away.
The queen is their slave.
www.maddox.xmission.com
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2005-04-12, 00:35
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Legio Draconorum Orkian
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Originally Posted by L,B'XXX
Would ya like me to leave the room so you 2 can be alone? (heehee ) I couldn't resist. |
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