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2005-03-13, 00:46
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Post-whore
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Minnesota
Posts: 1,136
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War Cry
"War Cry"
Why have I wasted my life,
What good was it all for,
Fighting battles that are not mine.
So now I cry in solitude,
Among the wreckage of my home
I've paid my dues to patriot wars,
I've suffered and bourne disgrace.
I've shed the blood of the innocent
In defence of your good name.
Years of my life have been spent away from those I love,
Now you send me to see the cinders of my past.
You bastard men,
Your souls condemned,
I'll fight you to the grave.
If I'm to die,
I'll die with a smile,
I will not die in vain.
This is my bands slow melodic song. The first five lines are spoken (ala Megadeth)
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Worker bees can leave,
Even drones can fly away.
The queen is their slave.
www.maddox.xmission.com
Last edited by Tulvox : 2005-03-13 at 16:27.
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2005-03-13, 07:14
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Post-whore
Banned
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Posts: 2,471
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a sober yin, to the raging "disposable heroes" yang. good work, i like it.
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2005-03-13, 16:00
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dsnt trust ne1 < 30
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Home is where the <3 is
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I liked it, too. It had a nice balance of imagery and got the point across. It would be a nice intro piece to something more descriptive detailing an actual battle or the post traumatic things that happened after.
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My eldest son's bipolar website: www.bipolarmanifesto.com
-wally: Mom, you shouldn't play after me because it makes you sound even worse than you already do. -wally:*grumbles and whispers quietly* I guess it's cuz I love you or something, but you're still a TURD
Grimm:I could read your mind but its in font size .5
Amadeus:Oh, and was there a cesserole (never mind spelling) involved?
Paddy:the fact that you didn't end up on a kids show makes me question my atheism
Dyldo: You evil strumpet!
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