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Old 2005-03-02, 20:30
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Lo, they do call to me...
 
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Active Euthanasia

Blunt force trauma to the skull
ending a painful existance
life
taken by my hands
the life of another
dead

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Eutha-
Nasia
suffer no more
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Nasia
death erases pain
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Eutha-

Nasia

Mind cleared of thought
one swing to the head
time is gone

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Nasia
suffer no more
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Nasia
death erases all
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Nasia
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Old 2005-03-03, 00:14
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Great flow. Cool wording. You're as boring to critque as powers'.
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Old 2005-03-03, 00:18
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Sweet shit, dude.
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